Hedgehog Stories by the Owl Class

We studied the book ‘The Hodgeheg’ by Dick King Smith. It inspired us to write our own hedgehog adventure stories. We hope that you enjoy them!

One day Max woke up at night. He wanted a wonderful adventure. So he went across the road to the park. He went to the hill and dug down and down, further and further. He was digging for a day or two and then he had reached the core of the planet.
Ronan

One day Max the brilliant adventurer wanted to have an adventure in the dark, dark night to the park. He crept to the park in the dark. He entered the park and rolled up the hill. He was fighting with the bugs. They were terrible. Then Max was all alone, lost and frightened. He saw the hill. He ran up and down till again he was where he started. He went over the dark bridge and then he was home. He slept and slept. The next day he told everyone about his adventures.
Beatrice

The little hedgehog Max went to play over in the park. Max went to get some food. Max was watching the humans. He wanted to cross the street to get to the park. Max crossed the street. He then wanted to go back home .At home Max wanted to go to sleep. He slept for a long time.
Aiyana

Max went to the park. He wanted to have an adventure to look for food. He was frightened from the humans. He wanted an adventure but he had to go over the bridge. It was very dark and he had to go over a pond. The pond was as a big as the sea. It was a super adventure!
Oliver

Max woke up at night. He wanted to go to the park. He couldn’t go to the park because the park was closed!
Marie-Cyel

Max went to the park. He ate all the apples. Max was lost. He couldn’t find his house!
Romy

Max woke up with a yawn. He crept along in the dark, dark, creepy night. Max was hungry. He went to the park so the adventure started. Max went to the creepy, dark underground tunnel. Then he got to the park. He ate everything there!
Lara

Max went to the park. He made his own house there. He was eating. He was not scared. He is intelligent, clever and brave.
Nishita

Max went to the big park for food but there were no bugs. He walked further, “Now wait…..where are the spiders?”, he thought to himself. He ran to Ma and Pa. “Were there no bugs at the park?” “ Yes, no, they are all gone but I have an idea. We will build a park in the garden so we can eat lots”. “Yes, woohoo!”
Sidney

One dark, dark night Max woke up…..he was STARVING!. He crossed the busy road so that he could get some food from the park. He was so happy. He ate all of the food. The he got lost. Max was crying and it was very spooky! Max was very scared, He followed the road and then he finally got home.
Lana

Max went to the park. He was looking for food. He wanted to eat. He ate some spiders and worms. He ate at the park.
Aziz

Max has a park.
Max is big.
Max is hungry.
Max is spiky.
Max is good.
Max is eating worms.
Jungmin

(Omar was absent when we completed this work)

As you can see the children’s writing is progressing really well. They have been working very hard to make their writing interesting for the reader by including lots of adjectives and similes.

Well done my clever Owls! I can see that I have many budding authors in the making, Dick King Smith had better watch out!

Best Wishes Mrs Hagenaars

6 comments on “Hedgehog Stories by the Owl Class

  1. Zeynep Celik on said:

    Woooww! You really did a great job, Owls! I enjoyed a lot every single adventure.

  2. lara on said:

    woooooo how nice storis

  3. marie-cyel on said:

    I liked when we did the story.

  4. Mrs Hagenaars on said:

    I thought that it was really nice that the animal hospital in the UK enjoyed our stories and wrote back to us. I have lots of budding authors in the making! Love Mrs Hagenaars x

  5. Lana Samy on said:

    This is one of my favourite story that we have done.

  6. Beatrice on said:

    He says very funny things. I like it a lot when we are doing this. I would like to see him in real life.
    I would like to do it again, reading the hedgehog story.

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